1970 Choose a work of recognized literary
merit in which a specific inanimate object (e.g., a seashell, a handkerchief, a
painting) is important, and write an essay in which you show how two or three
of the purposes the object serves are related to one another.
Anita Diamant's novel The Red Tent is a retelling of the biblical story of Dinah, daughter of Jacob. In this book, a specific inanimate object stands as a refuge for Dinah and her mothers, a connection to their ancestors, and a symbol of womanhood. Three guesses what it could be...
Every new moon, the wives of Jacob enter the red tent for their monthly cycle. According to their culture, women were to be separated from men during this time.When Dinah comes of age, she is accepted into the red tent as a young woman. Here, the fertile women spend three days in peace; resting, praying, and singing. The red tent, in the tribe of Jacob, was the symbol for womanhood and fertility.
In a patriarch-dominated society, the red tent symbolized refuge from demanding and sometimes cruel men. Ruti, "whose eyes seemed permanently blackened, was the slave-wife of brutish Laban. She found sanctuary in the few days of the month that she spent in the red tent, where Laban could not follow her. Even for the wives with gentler husbands, women were expected to submit completely to their husbands, and could not talk and joke freely in the presence of men, "In their day along in the red tend, Jacob's wives spoke among themselves about their husband's dreams and plans". It was also here that they were able to plot without being overhear. When the tribe of Jacob choose to leave Laban, his daughters steal from him his idols (gods), to take with them to their new home. Leah hides them in the red tent. Laban searches for them everywhere except, "his eyes fixed upon the women's tent on the edge of the camp. It was unthinkable that a healthy man would walk inside that place during the head of the month, among bleeding women - even worse, his own daughters". The taboo of the tent protects them from intrusions; and makes trespasses all the more horrible. Once his idols have been "polluted beyond redemption" by laying in the tent, he believes their magic to protect him is lost, and he never bothers his daughters again.
As well as being an oasis in a patriarchal world, the red tent is a place for passing on stories. These are the women's tales; being the only daughter of Jacob, Dinah "heard all the stories from her
mother and mother-aunts, which her brothers wouldn't be bothered to hear
or pass on". Dinah's aunt Bilhah tells her the story of how man first learned to spin wool into thread, and Rachael tells the stories of the births she has midwifed. Along with personal stories, the red tent is a place where Jacob's wives carry on traditions from their grandmothers and great-grandmothers, "The women sang all the welcoming songs while Rachael made fine wheat-flour cake in the three-cornered shape of woman's sex". The make sacrifices to their goddesses and welcome Dinah into the red tent with the traditional ceremony, "they put kohl on my eyes, and perfumed my forehead...painted my arms and legs with henna". The red tent is a place for the women's traditions to be carried on.
The red tent literally symbolizes the isolation of menstruating women, but within, it is a place for Jacob's wives to escape the controlling men of their time, and share their personal histories and traditions. The red tent is a very important object.
Since I have not read this before I cannot really say much about that but I think I have got a good understanding after reading this. I liked that this was not a summary of the novel and how you incorporated quotes which really took it to another level. I think the only I would suggest is to finish out with a stronger concluding paragraph because compared to the rest of the writing, it seems to be lacking a little bit.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Aishwarya that your concluding paragraph is a little weak. However, that's understandable since this is a timed writing. I haven't read this book before, but it sounds very interesting. Overall your essay sounds really good, but it could be structured a little bit better. I guess the biggest problem is that your introduction doesn't make it clear what you're going to be talking about. Maybe you could go back and write a better thesis? Right now, it just seems like you threw out a bunch of random details and then jumped into your argument. Your body paragraphs are great--just work on the intro and conclusion.
ReplyDeleteYour essay answered the prompt completely, with lots of support. I understand why your conclusion might be a little weaker because of this. Also the second and third sentences of the intro don't really make sense to me. Maybe deleting them would help, since they don't contribute too much.
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